
Feedback of other student's work:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iMQR_pPHOWg
WWW: Good use of micro elements, typography is matches the genre, location helps to create an atmosphere, good transition between scenes, good use of conventions of a title sequence
EBI: storyline wasn’t so stereotypical, if the pace was more fast paced, if there was more dialogue for audience to engage with, if characters were introduced quicker
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